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Kirsty

EDIT: Edited in line with LadyTwiglets comments.

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very very pretty model, LOVE the pose but again the skin tones let it down, she has a few spots and marks on her skin (no i dont mean her freckles!) that are quite distracting, it would be easy to edit them out, and the darkness of the skin makes her look older than she is-try editing it in lightroom (if you use it) and push the exposure and brightness just a little and up the blacks by 2 to keep the darkness around her, i think that would look a ton better :)

hope thats not too harsh! i love this shot a lot, but you asked for crit ;)
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NIKON CORPORATION
NIKON D300
7692307/100000000 second
F/13.0
35 mm
Nov 30, 2008, 2:47:06 PM

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